First off I want to say well done to Thomas and Brandon on
their presentation today. It was well detailed
and I was able to take lots of information from it. I feel like the main topics, about a safe and
dangerous audience, was spot on. When I have
to write knowing people I don’t know are going to read it I get nervous. I feel like they are going to critique me
harshly. For example, when I took my AP
U.S. History test last year, I was scared about what the graders might
think. They didn’t know me and the way I
write so they might feel like my writing was dumb. Especially because everyone has a different
grading scale, I was worried about how each person might interpret my essays. It’s so different writing for friends or family. They won’t judge you to harshly, nor will
they make fun of you. Instead if you
mess up at some part they might just laugh but try to help you afterwards. They actually care in trying to make you a
better writing. When you write to a
stranger, that’s it. Your first paper is
your final. After reading your first, they’ll
make an assumption about you right away.
They’ll assume you’re a good sought out writer or perhaps a poor writer
who needs to improve promptly. It sucks
that we cant always avoid those “dangerous audiences” but at least we can try
to get rid of our fear. Once we overcome
such fear, we may become better writers.
I agree that Thomas and Brandon's presentation was really great! I also happened to take many notes about it, a little too much notes. Hahaha. I really like how they explained the "dangerous audience" and the "safe audience" I actually connect with the "dangerous audience" more than the safe because I happen to feel pressured when reading to an audience. And I only present when I am forced to..not because I like it. I love to present to my family though. I am really comfortable around them. I can totally relate to you Esmerelda.!
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